Veer Ji,

That's a very bold step you have taken.
Reference:: Sikh Philosophy Network http://www.sikhphilosophy.net/jap-ji-sahib/22586-japuji-sahib-in-english-poetry.html
I have thought of this kind of thing about 25 years ago but nobody accepted it.

I will definitely help you improve on the rhyming part, if you accept my offer.