Prabhjot Kaur ji Waheguruji ki fateh,
your explination of first Ashtpadi of Sukhmani Sahib is from your heart and not from your mind.That is why it touches the heart.In explaining value of Naam Simran the examples u have taken from other places of sggsji are wonderful.It seems to me that u have very good understanding of gurbani.I am sure this is because of your own devotion & Naam Simran.
I pray to Waheguruji to give u more wisdom & enlightenment so that u can regularly do this Sewa.

With kind Regards & Blessings

Mahanbir Singh